Free Writing
W.A.L.T Write paragraph correctly
One day there was a little 6 year old girl named daisy she loved to pick daisy's but one day she was just strolling along the world wide daisy picking garden (AKA) DPG a giant ginormas gigantisaurus trumping through DPG. The gigantisaurus was destroying all the little daisy's, not on my watch said Daisy so she grabed the basket that she bought to pick the daisy's she took the wood wraped it around the gigantisaurus's nose and Dom! Dom! Dom! there was a hole in the ground about 50meters out from the dinosaur what's going to happen.
To be Continued....
12/8/12
Writing Activity
Yeah I can't wait until we go to Rainbow Zen I am going to slip, slop on that hijo slide like a crazy gorrila, oh! and on that diving board I am going flip flop flap like a dancing seal. But there is a down side to the trip my uncle's coming, he is the most bonkers,boring, bozo like a elephant packing a tantie but with a boring sense of humor.
Blog Post
Yeah I can't wait until I get my MGP pro because it's my birthday on Saturday. I know what it looks like because I seen it at the bike shed. It is white with black wheels and black clamps. It cost $180 dollars. I was actsually ment to get a $350 dollar scooter but my mum said it was to dare. On MGP's the wheel's are so smooth. I can go to the bowl with my broher and his friends when I get my scooter. I can't wait!
Evaluation - How good is this story?
I think this story is interesting and it makes you want to read it more because Hayley trys to make friends with the high bar and she makes it so realistic. I would rate it 5 out of 5 because the personification used in the story is great, just how she described how she felt and why she felt that way.
Synthesis- Coming up with new ideas. Number 8.
This is my gymnastics equipment. It is called the double trampoline 3000. It has 4 trampolines on top of each other, people have to try and reach the bar up the top. It increases the strength of people's leg muscles.
Application
Write a letter to your new friend the high bar apologizing for behaving so badly in the past and explaining why you behaved that way.
Dear High Bar,
I am so sorry about my poor behaviour. I should not have been so scared of you. The only reason I was scared of you is because I had a bad and embarrassing experience with you. I was afraid I might get hurt. So sorry. I hope now we can be friends.
From Keylen
Evaluation
Seeing both sides Make a chart and list your reasons for agreeing and disagreeing with this statement. “Gymnastics is too dangerous for little children”
I disagree with this statement because if the young children start off with the easy skills they can work their way up to harder skills.
I agree with this statement because children could slip and hurt themselves. That’s why they would have to be extremely careful.
For this activity we had to make a chart and list our reasons for
agreeing and disagreeing with this statement.
"Bullies
shout's be allowed to go on school camps"
Evaluation-Seeing
both sides I agree with big daddy not going on his school camp if he is a bully
because he has been mean to other students and that is not how you get to go on
fun trips. He would just think he can do anything if he keeps going on trips and
also hurt other students.
I disagree with
this statement because if he goes on camp and it’s a camp when you do team work
stuff, Big daddy could learn to work as a team and be nice to other students.
Reading Activity Comprehesion
Think of another title for the story and that tells you more about the problem.
The Devil of the Flying Fox.
Evaluation-Seeing both sides
I agree with big daddy not going on his school camp if he is a bully because he has been mean to other students and that is not how you get to go on fun trips. He would just think he can do anything if he keeps going on trips and also hurt other students.
I disagree with this statement because if he goes on camp and it’s a camp when you do team work stuff, Big daddy could learn to work as a team and be nice to other students.
Synthesis
This is my flying fox I designed for the story The Big Jump.
Reading activity Evaluation how good is the story
Give this story a rating out of five for each criteria
The setting is great I could pretty much tell what the story was about just by looking at the picture, I give it a 5/5. The writer used fabulous simles and it made me want to read more, 4/5. The story had a quite boring problem at the start but then it got better, 4/5. The story turns out great, It made me want to read it over and over again, 5/5
The story is great the author used fabulous describing words and it makes you want to read it more through out the whole story it was interesting.
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