Beans
First paragraph: Every saturday morning he bikes into town to play rugby.
Second paragraph: It's hard to bike up the steep hills on the way to the rugby grounds.
Thrird paragraph: he has to be at the ground's by nine.
fouth paragraph: By the time he gets to the grounds he is really puffed.
Next page first paragraph: He likes getting thrown down on to the mucky ground.
Second paragraph: After the game he strips off and hops under the shower.
Third paragraph:He gets a drink at the dairy after his shower.
fouth paragraph: You see all sorts of people out in the gardens working.
Next page first paragraph; There is a 2 killometer hill he has to go down on the way back from the grounds.
Second paragraph: As your picking up speed down the hill you get the smeel of the pigs.
third paragraph: When he get's home he leans against the sheed and felt really hot and done for.
fouth paragraph: They have an old lady next door to them, she' said to his mum that boy of yours has beans.
Pretty good retell. I get a clear picture of what is happening in the story. But remember you need to introduce the story. For example, the story is called Beans and it is about a boy who plays rugby on Saturday mornings. Remember the 5 w's. Mrs Larsen
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