W.A.L.T Use more detailed language and description for audience and purpose independently.
Once upon a time there was a little town called Contucky Fried Chicken, all they eat was contucky fried chicken they would just get fatter by the minute but one day a new law was layed down on the town. The judge said Your not allowed to eat contucky fried chicken because its to fatning, the town will have to eat contucky fried pork stue slime ball and grilled snail. Some super origanal weirdo freak said that sounds so ablu obubacus "What" the jugde said I mean super ablu obubacus in my country it means so super duper yummy the weirdo freak said.The rest of the town hates it. So the town had to live on contucky fried pork stue slime ball and grilled snail, Until.......... Mr hotshot came to town he set the law strait he made the law what its ment to be, eating contucky fried chicken.
You definitely use lots of great detail in your writing. Way to go! I love reading your stories.
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